Finding Out

Finding Out



"Imagine," he said to me
How long? To what degree?
"As long as your heart sings a sweet melody."

"Smile," he said to me
Where can I find the strength to be?
"Its in the light that lives in you and me."

"Love," he said to me
Is it possible for me?
"Yes, for only then will you be free."

 

I like the idea...could use more color

 

i love poetry and that just touches me down deep! you rock

 

Thank you all again for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it....

 

Nice poetry!!!

 

i loved reading this
tale of the lovers being together

to be free

love n peace from saff

free to love and be loved if you allow it will be...

 

I'm glad you liked it...its actually about an imaginary encounter of a girl (myself) and her guru (a man unknown)...sort of...hard to explain...but it came to me... and...I'm going to stop now...lol...

 

It sounds like something Chrisina Rosetti would have written. A wonderful mentress!

 

What a crappy keyboard I've got- make that Christina.

 

im not normally a fan of poetry witha regular rhyme and meter, but this was really good...

 

Thank you...I'm not really a write of regular rhyme and meter either...so I know what you mean...but thank you for your lovely comment...

Thank you also, kidder!