familiar one

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ommanipadmehum, Aug 31, 2006.

  1. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    familiar one



    will i finally meet you?
    will you finally come here and make this pain go away?
    will we ever meet up?
    will this feeling of helplessness ever disappear?
    will there be an end of this disillusionment?
    will you reach me, like reach me at last – figure me out?
    tell me familiar one,
    how long does it take you to find me?
    please, do not leave me in this mess
    tell me, do you really exist?
    will you finally reveal yourself to me?
    will you finally get the point?
    will i finally get the point
    - and accept the fact that i'm
    actually dreaming all this?
    will you love me as much as i love you?
    will you jump if i jump?
    will you do anything for me, cos you know
    I'd do anything for you?
    will you call me
    in the middle of the night,
    just to say hi,
    to see what i'm doing?
    will you sleep in my bed
    so that we can talk till 4am
    and share and cry and listen and
    just connect?
    oh tell me familiar one
    - will you want all this from me
    the way i want it/need it from you?


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    take care and
    god bless,
    marina
     
  2. AerialReaver

    AerialReaver Member

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    Once again, this is wicked. I love your writing style with all the questions. You engage the reader in a lot more thought, as if he/she is answering the question rather than someone give them the answers in a straight prose poem.
     
  3. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i really like this one too, it's something i can really relate to :D
     
  4. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    thanks for spending your precious time on reading and commenting my words/"work".means a lot


    take care and
    god bless,

    marina
     
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