Fade to black...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ronin, May 12, 2004.

  1. Ronin

    Ronin Member

    I never thought it would be like this
    not in a million years
    Never in my highest hopes
    or in my darkest fears

    For all my plans and expectations
    of what i'd hoped to see
    Disapeared in a moments time
    as i simply ceased to be.

    "Fade to Black" a work in progress by ronin

    constructive criticism appreciated!
  2. Ronin

    Ronin Member

    ok, any criticism- constructive or otherwise???

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