Everyone Add A Line To Make A Group Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    I'll start off with one line, then everyone just add a line after that, after X number of posts I'll post what we have so far. Just something to keep the creative juices flowing.
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    She's in love with herself
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I am all too inlcined to add here :"She likes the dark." Maybe you should start with a different line. lol.

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  3. NaykidApe

    NaykidApe Bomb the Ban

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    Alas, It's an unrequited love
     
  4. SelfControl

    SelfControl Boned.

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    She drinks her skin in like nobody else could.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I, to her, am eyes to reflect what she feels.
     
  6. freedomflower_grl777

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    If only she were born outside-in.
     
  7. SelfControl

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    Instead of with her inside out.
     
  8. MBintheOC

    MBintheOC We're all mad here..

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    If only she knew
     
  9. SelfControl

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    As much as she has told us

    (getting way too into this, even though I have no idea what it's about)
     
  10. SelfControl

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    the space left by her self-deceit was shaped like her true self.
     
  11. Astridwantpeace

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    she thought about the day she had walked on the bouleward of broken dreams
     
  12. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    and she looked back with tears in her eyes
     
  13. SelfControl

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    the eyes stay rooted fast in the back of her head, she is forced to endure past and perspective for all time, the crime is its own punishment.
     
  14. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    She plays confused
     
  15. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    Play she might, never in fear of being used.

    Devon Knight / Icurus ~
     
  16. EternalHunter

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    used with the need to know a truer meaning for life.
     
  17. SelfControl

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    Meanings come and go, elaborate beyond comprehension or simple beyond contempt.
     
  18. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Here's what we have so far, I like it!
    _________________________________________________________
    She's in love with herself
    She drinks her skin in like nobody else could.
    I, to her, am eyes to reflect what she feels.
    If only she were born outside-in.
    Instead of with her inside out.
    If only she knew, As much as she has told us.
    It was all just a false lie
    The space left by her self-deceit was shaped like her true self.
    She thought about the day she had walked on the boulevard of broken dreams, and she looked back with tears in her eyes.
    the eyes stay rooted fast in the back of her head, she is forced to endure past and perspective for all time, the crime is its own punishment.

    She plays confused.
    Play she might, never in fear of being used. Used with the need to know a truer meaning for life. Meanings come and go, elaborate beyond comprehension or simple beyond contempt.
     
  19. SelfControl

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    her hurt is epic, put behind her to tsunami down later.
     
  20. Meeshka Chaukinov

    Meeshka Chaukinov Senior Member

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    her eyes; glassy
    her soul; weary
     
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