Equilibrium

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mordiana, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. Mordiana

    Mordiana Member

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    I wrote this in the summer; it was based on some thought that came to me in a trip btw:

    Equilibrium

    From the day I opened my eyes,
    And saw the cold industrial light,
    I’ve been searching myself,
    In many darker and lighter ways,
    And I as a person alone,
    Came to my conclusion,
    I am zeropoint, I am death,
    There’s non but empthiness for me,
    As skin holding vacuüm,
    I wait for the day I can return,
    To the zeropoint, to find back,
    The equilibirum,
    That birth took away from me,
    I wait a lifetime,
    To search back, that,
    What waits within us,
    No emotions, no color,
    I am zero, I am grey (x3)
    Equilibium
    In
    Death
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    the zero and the infinity. In zero-space, all things are possible. This is the cosmic joke: we are nothing, and we are everything. (and so is everything else). Are you laughing yet? :D

    (great poem, very deep).
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I love the sig pic, TrippinBTM. Very cool.
    As for the poem, it's really deep, but it kinda makes me sad. It sounds like you are depressed to be where you are. Of course, maybe that's just my own interpretation of the poem. Either way, keep writing!!!
     
  4. TreeFiddy

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    yes, it was very good. a deep concept matched with very good wording and style. i enjoyed reaading it!
     
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