HER COAR WAS WHITE, BRIGHT AND CATCHY RANGES OF SPLATTERED SPONGES ARRAY RAINBOW VICTORY DEFEATED ONLY NONE GONE BEFORE THE LAST ONE LEAVES RARE MOMENTS SLIP OUT OF REACH WAITING FOR HAPPINESS ONE LAST TIME AWAKE TO THE LAUGHTER OF LOVE ONLY LIFE IS WHATS TAKEN AWAY GROUND SPLITTING SNOW GATHERS FLAVORED DREAMS DONT COME TRUE CARELESS HAD FORGOTTEN THE REST LAYING ON COOL BRICK STIFFENS SOUR CENTER DOES NOT HELP HEAT POWERFULL PINTS OF ELECTRIC PAINTS STRIKING MATTER OF YOUNG JUNGLES BRAVE PETALS CONCUR LIONS BEAUTY SLIPPERY NOTES ON MELODY NOT MUCH LONGER CAN WE TAKE THE ABUSE ONLY LIKE IS WHATS TAKEN AWAY GLARE AT THE ROTTEN GROUND UNFAIR TO TRASH A GIFT YOU'RE GIVEN UNEXPECTED PURPOSES FULFILLED ON TIME REMAIN AWARE UNTIL FURTHUR NOTICED FORWARD RETURNS US BACK TO SQUARE ONE NOT MUCH LONGER CAN WE TAKE THE ABUSE ONLY LIFE IS WHATS TAKE AWAY ******** what so u think? i wrote it in caps so i decided to type it in caps.. i was really slow when i wrote this and i just put down whatever came to my mind. so i thought i would share it and see what you think.
Wow, this poem says a whole lot and is full of many feelings. I like the strange placement of words and the overall feel of it. Excellent!!! You said you wrote it real slow......was you stoned? =)
yes. i was stoned. haha i wrote a bunch more. dont feel like typing them out now.. i'll get around to it
