Drunk like a Disturbed Loon

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    What, in this vague bubble
    while it seeps,
    tries to blur the edges of my speech?
    Such a subtle chemical that once
    (when i swalled various items)
    sought to vent the every emotion or non-emotion of my brain.

    Then in years to come
    the underage time is over.
    Hm but other things wile
    whilst i cry at points.
    Now
    this evening
    i lost the mental speech
    the speech
    the mental slip.
    and there i am,
    stuttering peoples names repetitively.
    They look at me, freaked.
    No wonder,
    i barely understand
    this is some sort of long term pay back for the vodka,
    straight
    mixed with skittles for added effect.

    I'm not surprised,
    but oh i am.
    Control is lost.
    Let's hand it to God.
     
  2. hailtothekingbaby

    hailtothekingbaby Yowzers!

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    Ahahahahaha - that rocks!! :D

    \m/ alcohol \m/

    BTW - do the skittles really work or am I just being my gullible self again?
     
  3. Imagine17

    Imagine17 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    lol great poem

    " i lost the mental speech
    the speech
    the mental slip.
    and there i am,
    stuttering peoples names repetitively.
    They look at me, freaked.
    No wonder,
    i barely understand
    this is some sort of long term pay back for the vodka,
    straight
    mixed with skittles for added effect."

    Thats my favorite portion, well described.
     
  4. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    me and my friends used to mix skittles and vodka to make different colours but it goes extra sticky and gross
     
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