If music could dream A moon would knife a delirious sun Flooding fast a delicate rose With sweet eternity Lusting for death
I really like this. I get the idea of the music being the moon destroying the rose of the sun. Which sort of violently tells me to chill out. While I like how short and to the point it is. I think extrapolating on the interconectedness of the whole thing would make it more accessible. You might do that by developing those great images a teensy bit more. That's assuming I understood this at all.
