Dreaming

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Angel of Avalon, Jun 25, 2005.

  1. Angel of Avalon

    Angel of Avalon Member

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    No one knows the color of your dreams
    Their twisting complexities flow in and out of focus
    Only you can define the balance between your subconcious
    Don't pretend your predictable
    No one can paint your soul
    Afterall, you keep things hidden
    Released emotions strewn out on a wire of life
    Hanging there, visible to surrounding spectators
    Those are paintable
    You are a true original
    Captivated in your solitude
    Sometimes I wonder how you do it
     
  2. Zilah Bey

    Zilah Bey Member

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    I especially like how you wrapped it up (Sometimes I wonder how you do it); well done and keep writing!
     

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