Dream Scream

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Aug 19, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    I wish our wistful kisses
    guess the time it took to cook my meal.
    In half an eggtimer, Tuesday at 2
    I bake my bread precisely,
    in a way that one would relay to me each night when i tucked my pillow round my ears,
    (to keep the cochroaches out)

    Mmm,
    sly dreams swizzle round my head as i slip down into illogical moon pools....
    wish kisses gave a slight..

    JOLT OF ANATOMY!!!

    ..which weirdo that kept the paces racing,
    the heartened bloodstream thicker than the quick fox
    streaming eyes of sickness in your face it's only 3 you silly fool
    what sort of corridoor is this vein?
    The footprints on the windowsill
    JUMP OFF JUMP OFF!
    guiltridden lurching
    stomach only surging:
    thorward backwoah'd/

    /ghastly firecrackers biting air
    and dark
    dark
    dark.
    shadow seeping nearer ever creeping
    in the deep of glad glands,
    they sit waiting:
    the puppet clown in a wheelchair,
    bursting
    waiting
    waiting
    cackling to screech
    unexpected surprise,
    no prize gained by the fearful retch in my throat
    smoothest jerk that pops behind every whispered corner
    haunting me like..
    like..
    like wobbling buildings when i'm at the top
    like spaghetti that turned into worms
    like the day i hugged my pet dog and it ripped out my throat.
     
  2. jesikhaviolet

    jesikhaviolet Member

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    that seems very confusing as always, and rather scary
     
  3. Pirate Hippie

    Pirate Hippie Member

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    Rock on

    that is kind of confusing, but I think its only because I don't know the feelings behind it. Other wise it is pretty sweet.

    Feral
     
  4. JJ DIAMOND

    JJ DIAMOND Member

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    That Was Great Keep Up The Good Work Kiddo, Happy Writting
     
  5. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    This was a good read, a kind of, "Off the top of your head" feel
    to it, though I know it ment alot more to you then any one
    who has and will read it, poems are like short books to me,
    I must give faces to the characters, I must feel the temp.,
    the story is all yours, the out come of it, as I have read it,
    that!, that is mine......
    Thank you for your thoughts, and sharing it with us.
    Devon Knight ~
     

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