Dream in reverse

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blkrubbersoul, Jun 8, 2008.

  1. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    I opened my eyes,
    but then I was kissing you
    With eyes wide shut.
    It was perfection
    on its purest form.
    But your lips were losing touch,
    and I didn’t feel the taste
    of your saliva no more.
    Was I really walking
    backwards to faultlessness?
    Were you floating away
    like an illusionary pet?

    As I was staring to get
    the panoramic view
    of this worst case scenario,
    I saw you were wearing
    a white dress with green
    circles. It was awful.
    But in you, it’s flawless.

    But what I couldn’t get…
    Why were you motionless?
    Why did you stand there?
    You could have run back
    to me, but you didn’t react.
    Your perfection turned to
    lifelessness; senselessness.

    I was so focused on you
    that I didn’t get to notice
    the beach at my right;
    some seagulls flying around us,
    and some resting in the sand.
    All this tranquillity didn’t fit
    the stage-setting of awkwardness
    on this peculiar moment of ours.

    You were turning into a black
    silhouette; a shadow.
    I couldn’t see your awful dress
    no more. I couldn’t even look
    into your shallow eyes.
    Not even could I tell
    if I was running in slow motion,
    or walking at regular speed.

    I was tasteless.
    I couldn’t feel the greyed-grained
    path I was moving on.
    All I got to see was your stilt
    image fading away with the distance,
    until being left with the nothingness.

    While flashbacking random moments,
    I felt a ray of light perforating my torso
    and my soul being sucked.

    I was asleep, once again…
     
  2. jwalk4bama

    jwalk4bama Member

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    i can digg it
     

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