Downward Shine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Burn, Aug 25, 2004.

  1. Burn

    Burn Member

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    Scream into the hole,
    Your hands and legs are bound,
    There's nowhere to go.

    Push me away,
    Let me in,
    Roll the dice and make my day.

    Tear the skin,
    Break the wishes to lies,
    And destroy all you had been.

    I'm going to let this die,
    I'm going to let this die,
    Such a part of me,
    I'm going to let this die,
    I'm going to let this die,
    To let go of me...

    Your eyes are useless,
    Your touch is the test,
    But fails to reach the line.
    Broken ribs,
    Are what I feel,
    It's enough to tell me what is and isn't real.

    Poison kiss,
    A gaze full of decay,
    Is this a mirror...
    Or my rightful way.

    I'm going to let this die,
    I'm going to let this die,
    Such a part of me,
    I'm going to let this die,
    I'm going to let this die,
    To let go of me...
     
  2. rwflash

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    How long does it take to right these kinds of poems?
    I ussually spend 10-12 hours daily writing my poems in a corner of my room where it is confy it is also where i make long sentences that need periods on the end of them
     
  3. Burn

    Burn Member

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    I usually write them within a few minutes, during my inspiration for them. It flows out.

    When I'm uninspired, though, it takes much longer. Sometimes as long as a day.
     
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