Does this Poem make sense?

Discussion in 'German' started by Cakehead53, Jun 14, 2012.

  1. Cakehead53

    Cakehead53 Guest

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    die Tür
    Alfred Von Gugenstefner

    Man kann nur ein bisschen kennen,
    Können Sie meine Wörter lesen?
    Ich hat einmal geglaubt:
    Götter leben und spielen am Himmel…
    Ich war leider falsch.
    Es ist nur ich,
    Ich mache ein Traum,
    In viele Träume suchen ich ein Ende.
    Dort bilden ich ein Ausstellung die Götte.
    Ich kenne ein bisschen.
    Es ist nicht genügend.

    I have only done german for 4 or 5 months. I just decided to put this together with my very small vocabulary. Any suggestions, grammatical or otherwise?
     
  2. nudpiedo

    nudpiedo Guest

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    Well, I am in germany since some years and I can tell you that's mostly understable.
     
  3. seytan

    seytan Guest

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    There are some mistakes I correct them for you ;)
    If you want write down in english want you want to say, becuase some scentences makes no sense.
     
  4. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

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    it makes no sense at all

    christ kid

    don't you speak american???
     

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