plz be honest. this is the first happy love poem i have written and it is very important to me for this poem to be perfect. every other peom i have written has been about depression. so plz comment and give suggestion and or criticism. i would really be thankful for any of these or advice. once upon a time not so long ago i first heard your voice and my soul was lit aglow. you whispered words so true so soft and when i knew you loved me my heart was brought aloft. together we continued through to this very day and when i think of how i feel there's nothing i can say. you've given me so much more than fairytales could offer not with titles or with riches but with a different kind of prosper. forget all those people who shouldn't have said never because together we will live happily ever after.
