Desire

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sky, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. sky

    sky Member

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    You're the one
    The last girl that I'll love
    The only one that truly has my heart
    You're the face behind the song I need to write
    So that I can express everything left untouched
    & there's purity in sound
    I drop my hands to my sides
    Looking for expression is a silent self obsession
    that I drench with my devotion
    and roll over my soul
    Celebrate the moments we've been given & belief
    Because time is without mercy
    and seconds strain to reach the dawn
    For hope in an extention
    The time to live in love with you
    the chance to live what I search for behind melodies
    in unfinished songs
    In your arms I am passion twisting breath into a hum
    I'm a dance kept alive by the rythym in a drum
    I'm every dream that's moved me.
    we'll never be alone.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this piece is lovely to read.

    how time never gives up....
    how delicate you explain...
    i love the way you allow us to view
    your love in words.
    beautiful ...

    love n peace from saff
     
  3. EdgeUcatE

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    nice ending especially, and I liked the relation of desire to a song/melody, keep it up, check out "Blind Blue Eyes" for my love story. peace
     
  4. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    this reminds me of ani difranco's rock paper scissors.

    "desire drags me right out of myself
    like a gas soaked rope tied to a piece of coal
    and i'm getting pretty good at looking at the bright side
    while the flames rip along the sand and swallow me whole"
     
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