DePrEsSiOn

trading the love i once knew..
cradling a hate that cradled me first
crawling in the dark through a fogged world
why cant i get up
why wont they let me
the hearts of the haze
faded me out
love is amusing
why cant i grasp it
finding my breath
i can finally see
i can see my breath before me
my own sought freedom
death is before us
life is behind us
fight it away
let me know why we have to go thorugh it....

 

Nice words...I am writing a song write now similar to it.

 

thank you...song writing is my passion..i always try to convert my poems into songs..roughly..lol

 

Wow dreadlover, this was amazing. You couldn't have better described the way I've been feeling lately. Thanks for sharing this, it really hit home. I don't feel so alone now. *HUGS!!*

And you're beautiful

Peace

 

thank you (bows) oh and moonjava sweetie if your referring to my being beautiful to the sig pic in my posts..thats ani difranco but yes shes beautiful isnt she?

 

Yes, she is beautiful. But I can tell from reading your poetry that you are a beautiful person as well. x x x

 

aahh okay i see what u mean :::blushes::: thanks

 

WOW that is beautiful dread lover!! Your words are beautiful, and hypnotizing. From a fellow poet I loved it. Keep up the good work!!
( Annie DiFranco is VERY beautiful I love her)

 

Hey!! I like your poem it's very interesting... I enjoy thought poems... I write many of those types... great job. *applaus* *claps* *shakes hand* good job

 

Thanks guys....I appreciate all of the feedback ::::HugZ tO ALl:::::