Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CrucifiedDreams, Jul 3, 2006.

  1. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

    Destroy me
    Take me from the inside out
    Rush through my veins
    And make me wish a different dream
    Yes rush though me
    Come again
    Heart beating faster
    A bottle of vodka
    A side order of nicotine
    Yes take me now
    I’ll surrender myself
    Smoke curling around my head
    In a satisfying delusion
    I can taste you
    So close
    On the tip of my tongue
    On the edge of my heart
    Blister my soul
    And show me what it is to feel
    A sliver or hope
    Of something more
    Rendering me useless
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Wow. This is good. Wish that I could write like you! Love the imagery

    peace and love
  3. tishie_bear

    tishie_bear Member

    That's deep man. Loved it.
  4. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

    Aw, thanks guys.
  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i like this alot :D
    really good :D
  6. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

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