Death Invites Despair

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Len2000, Aug 11, 2006.

  1. Len2000

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  2. myself

    myself just me

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    Interesting piece of work...
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

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    hi there ,i loved this torment of time....

    what words to express the change
    even your change towards life,

    yet you question......

    lovenpeace from saff...
    be whole...

    ... forebearance isn't appology ... life's hinderence to come.....
     
  4. hippie_chick666

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    Good piece, never seen anything like that. It is truly original. I like it!

    Peace and love
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    This reminded me of Nine Inch Nails; a more ellegant form exploring the same themes. I enjoyed it, definitely different, which is always a good thing :)
     
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    I really hope you aren't for real. If so, I'm afraid.
     
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