laying here at night thinking about you as i lay here wondering if you are going to be okay and that your not going to give up on life but the more i think about you my heart breaks into million of tiny pieces pieces that are tainted to black sulfur dripping slowly into my veins to be circulated through my body letting my feelings be teased by this knowing i will never hold you kiss you nor talk to you face to face i only see this in a dream and wish hard that it could be real and when i open my eyes that dream is gone forever and makes me feel horrible once again to feel lonely and that im not wanted in this world I cry on my cold lonely bed letting my pillow absorb the tears and my thoughts turn darker than before wanting me to cut myself again turning that lovely idea over and over in my mind and finally i take a razor blade to my ivory smooth skin feeling the blade slide across my sweet flesh watching the blade cut into my skin as it starts dripping blood ' off the metal blade and drip to the floor pooling around me...like a red velvet blanket wrapping itself around me letting the warm leave my soul and let the coldness enter instead.... dear lover please leave white roses on my coffin and dont weap for me...it wasnt your fault it was mine all along..... and this was my only escape route and the only way to make myself happy for once in my life Rest in peace dear sweet child of mine ill dream of you forever and ever....
Very good, lots of good imagery and emotion. Good enough to be convincing. So, I hope this is just a poem and not a real consideration on your part. Good poets should live forever, and fill our lives with their excellent words every day. Keep writing!!
thankyou. Um this is just a poem of what i feel. At one time in point i did consider of doing it but im too chicken to do it. Instead i write down what i feel on paper and let the emotions come alive in that instead inside of me. Thanks for the comment. Ashhy
Glad to hear it! Princess, your poetry reminds me a lot of that by Freakymetalchic and Blackheartbitch. If you haven't already encountered them on this forum, I suggest you look them up. And view their work. I suspect that you might have a lot in common with them. And probably would really relate to their writing. They are best friends online and in real life. Oh, and welcome to the forums! Enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!
