Dead Weight

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by innocentpoison333, Aug 16, 2005.

  1. Ripped across her chest
    Lifeless and undiscovered
    Lies a world of wonders
    Dreaming in color
    Scheming with delight
    Here she lays here, what a sight

    Her hands soft and fair
    Her eyes unblinking with fear
    This girl laying in the grass….

    She found the secrets
    To life
    At Last…
  2. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

    Yet another great one...And may i say, on a completely different note, you're very beautiful
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    Beautiful, I really dig it. :)

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