Dead Weight

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by innocentpoison333, Aug 16, 2005.

  1. innocentpoison333

    innocentpoison333 Member

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    Ripped across her chest
    Lifeless and undiscovered
    Lies a world of wonders
    Dreaming in color
    Scheming with delight
    Here she lays here, what a sight

    Behold
    Her hands soft and fair
    Behold
    Her eyes unblinking with fear
    Behold
    This girl laying in the grass….

    She found the secrets
    To life
    At Last…
     
    innocentpoison333, Aug 16, 2005
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  3. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    Yet another great one...And may i say, on a completely different note, you're very beautiful
     
    citrus_seas, Aug 16, 2005
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  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Beautiful, I really dig it. :)
     
    TrippinBTM, Aug 17, 2005
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