day of heartbreak, rock me fast asleep when at last the tears are tired bleeding sunset, dip your weary head beneath my pillow and dry away the lies legend leads me to believe that power and strength only come from within but experience brings me to my knees before the only one i know who can make me smile again
'day of heartbreak'! what a great line, it's like a twist of daybreak! 'dry away the lies.' this line, added with the blood imagery, reminds me of a murdered sun perhaps?
yeah i know...i wrote it a few years ago when i was not so experienced at writing...but it seems i have just relived this experience, so maybe i'll add onto it
