cursed

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Gsmall, Sep 20, 2008.

  1. Gsmall

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    my first poem a little story i made up i dont know be as harsh as you can i wana get better.

    shot in the head, thought to be dead
    ressurected at death, not his last breath
    war crys a lie, nice try
    pulled out of a sleep, wounds bled deep
    revenge on his mind, nows not the time
    lost in the game, never the same
    swallowed up at a young age, filled with much rage
    bought his nine, cost only a dime
    thinking what to do, not about who
    asked around, was deep in a bound
    talked to his homie, was this dude lee
    armys assembled, only to resemble
    driving himself insane, waitin for his reign
    impossible to find, was this a sign
    lookin for this lee, not able to see
    day by day wasted time, he was just another in line
    time passed on, found out what went on
    days after bein shot, lee deserved what he got
    held up it was a jack, not able to hold his stack
    shot in the head six times, his past only crimes
    when heard somethin snapped,now only trapped
    time speant wasted, spendin it pasted
    now like lee, unable to see
    only worst, putin people in the hurst
    this man was cursed​
     

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