Cross-Faded Hearts.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Karmic1, Jul 24, 2005.

  1. Karmic1

    Karmic1 Member

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    Cross-faded hearts,
    look to the stars,

    Clipped tracks,
    is what love lacks,

    No distortion?
    Out of proportion,

    Sloppy vocals,
    Choose and cull,

    Fade in fade out,
    But never burn-out,

    Add some panning,
    but no "double-clicking"

    And the mic sends it's signal,
    and the visuals are spectral,

    The song ends with love,
    in the perfect octave.
     
  2. etherealeyez

    etherealeyez Member

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    This reminds me of small local shows I've attended, the ones where I am awesomly surprised at a band/musician that I've never heard of and am thrilled to have discovered and can't wait to share the news with others. The kind where I leave in love with a player, sweaty from dancing and hoping to dream of it again that night. You said much with few words which is hard to do sometimes.
     
  3. Karmic1

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    Thanks for the input.
     
  4. Karmic1

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    Wow, my poetry must be reallll bad, only one comment.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I really enjoyed the first and last stanzas.
    Felt an observational perspective throughout.
    This speaks of the depths, of music theory,
    the poet has embraced.
     
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