creative explosion (untitled poem)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    Let there be some other flight of choice for me to consume
    Like a timebomb ticking
    Throwing away that what was left behind
    and bringing back the essence
    that always belonged in the heart and in the mind
    I am so into the feel of the flow
    and all it has to offer
    You bring me hope on the everlasting storm that is life
    and you are such warm shelter
    from the clouds of my mind.
     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Well done, "Creative Explosion" would actualy make a prety good title.
     
  3. Aurora of Oceania

    Aurora of Oceania Member

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    Wonderfully written. I agree, Creative Explosion is a good name for this poem, as it reminds me of the bright sparks of the poet that are spread around earth and connect us all as we breathe and read. I look forward to reading more of your poems. :)
     

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