cowboys, coffee and coversation...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mamasoul, May 19, 2004.

  1. mamasoul

    mamasoul Member

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    all blues and bones, bandaged in weathered clothing
    silver pins adorned the bandana 'round his cream colored cowboy hat
    100's burned between long, arthritic fingers
    he told me about his leather boots
    he told me about peruvian cocaine
    he told me he could get me anything i wanted, but i didn't need much.
    cowboys, coffee and conversation.........

    i'd like to get this published....
  2. FreakyJoeMan

    FreakyJoeMan 100% Batshit Insane

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    Nice :D Very cool
  3. veinglory

    veinglory Member

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    I am not familaiar with the right sort of markets, so I can suggest any. I would suggest capitalising the 'I's and ending with a conventional three dot ellipsis ... , or possibly just a period as the ellipsis makes the poem feel a bit unfinished to me.

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