all blues and bones, bandaged in weathered clothing silver pins adorned the bandana 'round his cream colored cowboy hat 100's burned between long, arthritic fingers he told me about his leather boots he told me about peruvian cocaine he told me he could get me anything i wanted, but i didn't need much. cowboys, coffee and conversation......... i'd like to get this published....
I am not familaiar with the right sort of markets, so I can suggest any. I would suggest capitalising the 'I's and ending with a conventional three dot ellipsis ... , or possibly just a period as the ellipsis makes the poem feel a bit unfinished to me.
