Come With Me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lanaia74, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    Come take my hand and I will take you away
    To a land beyond sickness and pain
    I will be your best friend, please let me stay
    I will make you free as a horse's mane.

    Come away with me
    To the land beyond all logic
    I promise you will be happy, just wait and see
    Away from all the world's evil so thick.

    Come with me ecstatic you will be
    No more will you play life's devastating game
    I will deliver you from life's bloody sea
    You have everything to gain.

    Come with me I offer you peace
    You will never again have to play lif'e's confusing game
    Don't be afraid I'm not a beast
    I'm just a part of life for that me you can't blame.

    Come with me and I shall set you free
    Away for life's turmoil
    Because, I death, will always be
    I will choke out your life, for that makes me royal.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like the twist at the end. For me, it was unexpected. Good job writing!

    Peace and love
     
  3. ethanberry

    ethanberry Member

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    Wonderful piece of creativity. Good work, lanaia.
     
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