Clouds

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Vetty214, Sep 4, 2007.

  1. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Boundless sky
    their earth
    the wind
    their emotion
    and like us
    independent
    spirits
    crossing paths
    and do they look
    to us
    as their heavens
    and if so
    do they cry?
     
  2. poopzilla33

    poopzilla33 Member

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    good job my friend, i enjoyed it
     
  3. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Simple and to the point. I like it a lot. I'm sure they cry, I know I do.

    Peace,
    A.
     
  4. art_hippie

    art_hippie Member

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    yeah they cry,with little drops:]
     
  5. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    beautiful parallels... i love the ending question with such an obvious answer.
     
  6. Vetty214

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    Thanks for the nice words, I'm glad you liked it. Have a beautiful September all! Vetty
     

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