Cloudbusting

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by myself, Nov 19, 2006.

  1. myself

    myself just me

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    I’m chasing the clouds

    Trying to hunt them

    To shoot through these moving illusions

    Sometimes only chasing air

    Being left with nothing

    The soft illusion having slid away




    They float above me

    Gliding gently or speeding by

    Dispersing when I try to shoot

    Disappearing like any illusion

    When you try to touch it




    I am chasing illusions

    Running below them

    Watching them sail away

    Escaping my control

    Galloping above my eyes

    Beyond my shooting

    Beyond my touch

    Beyond my reach

    Leaving me behind
     
  2. 6469

    6469 Member

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    Thats a pretty cool poem!
     
  3. myself

    myself just me

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    thanks :)
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Oh I love it! Great job! :)
     

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