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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by misanthropic42o, Mar 28, 2005.

  1. misanthropic42o

    misanthropic42o Member

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    i'm a poet
    because my words, they do rhyme
    and i'm a criminal
    because i like to commit crimes
    i'm an anarchist
    because i rebel against rules
    i'm a feminist
    because i contradict tools
    and how many times
    have you been told your something your not?
    put into a category, not even fought
    against these minds that clone
    our very souls
    putting us into categories
    to make you feel whole
    i'm a bitch
    because i say this
    and i guess i'm a hypocrite
    have you had enough of it?
    i can be your worst nightmare
    and still hold you dear
    i can make you scream in agony
    then wipe away your tears
    and i am a slacker
    cause i embrace the lethargy
    that has swallowed me up
    stereotypes shall be the doom of me.

    "the evidence of cloning is already present among teenage girls"
     
  2. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    nice message - stereotypes conflict the individual
     
  3. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    i love the way things speak for themselves, so i gotta point out a seemingly(in my mind at least) symbolic grammatical airer; your as apposed to you're. your is like reffering to yourself like you're something you own. but really, you just are.

    they will NEVER be able to clone our souls, but I understand the need for such powerful statements.

    lastly, individualism means you are in a divided dualism. just like inflammable means the thing will catch on fire, independence is a lie sung by a choir. In dependence? I understand why people think individualism and independence are good, but they are also bad as they divide us. but the truth is all around us, we are not alone, we are AllOne. Every single thing we do and think effects everyone around us. remember that.
     
  4. misanthropic42o

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    i really like your poem your very talented :)
     

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