So I've always been decent with words, and lately have been trying to write rap music. I wrote this to the "Cum on everybody" beat by eminem. It's still a bit rough, but I'd love thoughts and opinions on it. Haters Piss Me Off Come on everybody* I don't like some shit, But I ain't a hater, I love the girls, But I ain't a player, My tounge is sharp, As a god damn knife, I won't hesitate, To end a life, Yo my beats are fat, I ain't playin dog, Kill every track, That I come across, Float like a butterfly, Sting like a bee, Pay attention, All eyes on me, Y'all pissed off, Cuz I'm legit, Like nicotine, You cannot quit, Bump my shit, On your stereo, Smoke a joint, On the patio, Get fucked up, Then spit a rhyme, I'd slit my throat, 'Fore I do time, I may not like it, But I tolerate, Y'all don't like shit, And you just hate, Why you flippin out, Over little things, Don't like the vibes, Of suffering, You come across, In the type of way, That crosses me, So I got to say, Haters piss me off, It's rediculous, The kind of thoughts, They think of us, They don't give a fuck, About other people, If you ask me, It's kind of evil, Haters hate, And lovers love, Peaceful people, Play the dove, Fighters fight, Until they die, Bitches bitch, And whine and cry, Don't talk shit yo, I'm sick of bitches, I don't really trip, 'Less one of y'all snitches, I got a few things, I get pissed about, Fuck with my homies, And get knocked out, Imma beat ya sensless, I'm sick of y'all, You so defencless, I'm off alcohol, I'm numb off rum, And a little gin, Stumblin round, With a fatass grin, Hit every lane, When I'm in my car, Smoke cigarettes, Til I cough up tar, Had it up to here, With all the hate, Show me the love, Or get out my face, I hate bad vibes, When they around, They stress me out, Gotta calm down, Just let it go, For I smack you dude, I really don't like, That attitude, Haters piss me off, It's rediculous, The kind of thoughts, They think of us, They don't give a fuck, About other people, If you ask me, It's kind of evil, Haters hate, And lovers love, Peaceful people, Play the dove, Fighters fight, Until they die, Bitches bitch, And whine and cry, I'm tellin y'all, It's frusterating, To be the one, Who isn't hating, Do like I do, And just give up, Fuck the world, Don't give a fuck, It ain't the end, Know for a fact, Life goes on, What you think of that?, In yo' opinion, It aint that simple, To let it go, It's the principal, Realax a bit, You cynical, Chill and shit, It ain't that bad, Roll with it, Just don't get mad, It ain't worth it, To trip about, I hear you dog, No need to shout, You so pissed, That yo' face is red, Forget the hate yo, Love instead, Just to show, Just so you know, Haters piss me off, It's rediculous, The kind of thoughts, They think of us, They don't give a fuck, About other people, If you ask me, It's kind of evil, Haters hate, And lovers love, Peaceful people, Play the dove, Fighters fight, Until they die, Bitches bitch, And whine and cry, How many ways, Do I have to put it, Be respectful, Don't talk shit, You'll end up hurt, Or maybe dead, Shoulda shown, Some love instead, I had yo' back, You were my friend, We been pal's, Since way back when, Somethin changed, Now you ain't right, Yo' mind is wack, So sad a sight, Fuck it then, My life goes on, Fuck the hate, Just move along, Try to take, The higher route, I'm finished now, Y'all Imma peace out. My next question, is where can I get more beats like that? I can definatly write, but it's only legit (and not all bullshit) when I've got a good beat like that one. Anyone know where I can find more (and even origional) beats like that? Or better yet, someone who could make them? I don't want to end up having to make my own, but I'm running out of options d: Thanks for your time everyone.
