the song of the world is written in sand flowing, changing never the same the tide rises and washes it away each day is a chance to rewrite it we can change the world
I like the opening lines. And there's something to celebrate in constant renewal. Far from Keats' sad lament: my name is writ on water.
A positive vibe. I enjoyed your poem. A new dawn casting its rays in rose and gold; the power of love, beyond and with will, to transform all anew.
i must admit...i saw ur age and for a second i thought it was going to be terribly cliche...and i appologize...i was thoroughly impressed...good poem...i liked the flow and as sylvan said, the positive vibe...
