Can We Talk?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Sep 6, 2009.

  1. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    I am the gun of tongues,

    Having the right to carry weapons

    Of heavy bitching.

    I am a beach of teeth,

    Lounge in my enamel sands-

    My bay of jaw and spit.

    Powers ways’

    Behind the barrel of my licks,

    O the sea-boomerang of mandibles

    Eats me while I happily Riviera.
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Very original and thought provoking. Nice job.
     
  3. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    Thanks to both of you!
     

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