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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by FreeBird1969, Sep 11, 2006.

  1. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    It was high tide
    When I took a look
    On the other side of maybe
    The waves were friendly
    Giants,
    but friendly giants
    Reaching out their longwinded
    Stories for any stray listener
    Digging their footpads into the
    muddy goop of winter
    It's pressing in
    On the clouds, on the sea
    On the sand, and on me
    It's heavy upon us
    with the scent of pine needles
    burning
    Things wash up on the shore
    And they aren't dirty
    And they aren't messy
    And they aren't packaged
    Perfectly formed particles
    of sand
    Perfectly formed by chance
    And the wind against
    My scarred knees
    Helps them heal a little faster
    The sea salt dried onto
    My toes
    Makes them unwind
    And wriggle a little slower

    I am that piece of wood
    That washes up
    I look like clamshells
    All burst up and crammed
    into the smallest corners
    of the submarine
    But I am precious
    Because I am unrare
    And I am discolored
    Because I am taken
    For something
    That does not exist.

    The end?
     
  2. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    You already know my thoughts on this piece of art. :D
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    i love reading your poetry krystin

    it just flows so awesomely

    plus, this one and the hurricane one i feel i can relate too

    maybe it's the whole carteret county thing

    dare i say, maybe there's something in the water? ;) :D
     
  4. Columbo

    Columbo Senior Member

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    Wow ! I'm impressed
    Do you ever read any poems by John Hegley?
    he writes humour verses but is biographical

    where can I read more of your work?
     
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