Burnt dreams

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lila grace, Oct 11, 2006.

  1. lila grace

    lila grace Member

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    Burnt dreams never came

    They’re pushed aside to that place where the sun won’t shine

    The tide has died

    The sea don’t soothe

    The fire burns

    The night wont end

    Burnt dreams are blood with splinters running through my veins

    The artist that wasn’t heard

    The child that never grew

    The mother that miscarried

    The desert without rain

    The sore that won’t heal

    My wounds are salted when I think of burnt dreams that never came



     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very well written. I like the imagery and can really relate to what you write about. I too have had dreams and hopes destroyed or felt like they were. Keep on writing!

    Peace and love
     
  3. misterrain

    misterrain Banned

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    Wait a minute... how do you know they were burnt if they never came?
     
  4. lila grace

    lila grace Member

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    The dreams are burnt/forgotten/unrealised etc even though I wanted them so much,therefore they were all dreams that never came (i.e were realised).
     
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