Bolivian Rain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Jan 4, 2006.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Bolivian rain
    flooding the gutters
    with urgent ennui,
    muddy brown flower petals
    that tumble somersaults
    in a chaotic trance
    to the curb where they
    plateau--stranded--
    how you dance on
    the cobblestones
    and shy softly in my ears
    of a distant river.
    You hold my hand as
    I stand with the woman
    of three colors.
    Under her shelter the
    weather smells like spiny mint
    and her bridge of braid
    attracts drops and haze
    and her grace is a halo
    of exhaust and mist,
    and her eyes
    are a grey mirror
    beckoning you back.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Sweet nuances, full of grace.
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    what a fantastic finish... great poem girl, very good atmosphere to it, earthy... I enjoyed much! good to read some new stuff! :)
     
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