How can one individual… Turn my world upside down… In less than a lifetime… For a lifetime… By three simple words… A glance that proves them… And a heart that follows… I’m touched I’m broken Yet whole I’m here I’m warm With a shivering soul I’m stunned I’m foolish With lost appetites I’m trusting I’m changed From those sleepless nights Blue eyes, what lies behind… Behold those eyes, love’s blind?… I gaze deep, my mind drops, Rapid heart beat, skips than stops, Or merely slows as a dream awake, Fairytale emotion every breath we take, This raw simple feeling, so complex, Intricate design of yet delicates, Unreal reality as adoring flaws, A rare red rose without claws; Closed eyes, what lies behind… Behold shut eyes, love’s blind… Her scent fills the room, I gently smile, Can still taste the aroma, it’s been awhile, In the moonlight, I still see your face, That dark nights could never erase, This feeling of visions and perfect perception, Floating on clouds in this love linked connection, My hands caress her sleek goddess curves, Filling every want and temptation, she deserves, The heat moves in waves like stirred oceans, We speak no words but with rhythmic motions, I feel a sole touch of lips to my warm cheek, I open my eyes to those which I seek; Blue eyes, that I’m behind… Behold no eyes, love’s blind… She smiles, who could ask for more, Than her in my arms, I could die for, I get lost in thought, those blue eyes, Like imperfection itself could only tantalize, Angels have no idea of their significance, You changed my life for an eternity since, Stepping into my reality, I’ve drifted from here, Her eyes slowly shut as I hold her near, For I gently watch her peacefully sleep, Of sweet dreams of countless sheep, As the end of my fingertips softly control, The mysteries from within her very soul. -Edge Authors Note: Hey everyone I'm new here, but I've written poetry before, I've only been doing it for a lil' over a year now, I'm 16, male and from Minnesota, USA. Got bored on 3 other sites cus no one posts new stuff very often so I decided to come here. I hope u all enjoy. peace
Thanks for da props, I noticed not many people give feed on here, most of'em just drop sh*t, nice ta get some feed. peace
sorry, said nothing to me at all. It was .... bland. All been said before. I want a poem that pulls me around and makes me think differently. This was trash TV.
i loved reading this piece how soon we forget life when love blinds and reflects whats hidden,how a soul can long for the meaning of soft love, what words you write to reveal your passion your joy of this love. or even lose... how do you see the blind blue now... thank you for posting love n peace from saff
Thanks for the feed Littleskinny, seriously, I'm glad u explained ur reasoning and we all have our own opinions in which I respect, check out my post 4 u to "pull u around some more". Thanks for the rest of the feed too this site's aight. peace
