Big Sur

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stalk, May 25, 2006.

  1. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    so every thought
    has a ripple, magic
    is the butterfly trailing
    becomes a cloud
    above a river where
    my roots have slithered,
    leaning back now
    to the sunshine thru redwoods,
    a vision of eyes
    in this fire.
    So much energy being
    converted,
    this heat provokes
    meditative
    understading.






    Just got back from camping,
    thought I would improvise
    and spit some jazz for you guys.

    :H
     
  2. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

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    lovely imagery... like a train of thought floating out on a cool breeze... calming and wonderful. tanks for sharing!
     
  3. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    Tanks for sharing,
    rolling in @ sunrise,
    I was still drunk when I rose
    to see the tanks,
    and the men
    and the fire,
    and half my body laying
    over there.
     
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