Bewildered

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BrideOfLibertine, Jan 18, 2006.

  1. BrideOfLibertine

    BrideOfLibertine Member

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    Tucked inside your own magnificent world
    you are a God, and have everything to sustain it..
    everything to sustain me
    Shall we dance together?
    Dance to a rhythm that has no basic beat...
    I'll forget the stars and everything that's ever been told,
    and simply breathe you in
    Instantaneously you'll give me the answers to it all
    We'll make our own stars
    our own moons and sunrises
    We'll swim in an ocean of ecstasy and drown in crashing waves
    and as we erupt everything will be clear and confusing all at once
    no regrets, only exhaustion
    and I will be spell bound by your intense desire...to just be
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    i love these lines :)
     
  3. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    I enoyed reading this. He is a god, and you are his goddess; his believer.
    I especially like this line-

    "Shall we dance together?
    Dance to a rhythm that has no basic beat..."

    Thanks for sharing. Keep writing! :)
    peace&<3
     
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