Beauty Rises (Draft)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StarGateKeeper, May 28, 2004.

  1. StarGateKeeper

    StarGateKeeper Member

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    She rises...

    From the sea of unborn beauty

    For none have seen her kind before

    None shall see it after her…

    Rising from an ocean

    of realities dreams...

    Like a flower

    Plucked and drifting toward the sun…

    Her hair deep earth-tone

    Yet flowing, shining

    Chestnut gold spun like silken threads

    Each hair flowing free and living

    Her eyes are midnight hidden in moon-glow

    Her smile outshines the sun

    Her body can not hide

    The perfection of curve

    That Mother Nature herself created

    And Mother Earth envies

    No unearthly satin

    Nor any fruit, bread, or animal down matches

    Her ultimate softness

    Soft as a candle flame

    And from its glow

    Beauty rises.
  2. akhc

    akhc Member

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    I like it.. reminds me of Byron

    She walks in beauty, like the night
    Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
    And all that's best of dark and bright
    Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
    Thus mellow'd to that tender light
    Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

    One shade more, one ray less,
    Had half impair'd the nameless grace
    Which waves in every raven tress,
    Or softly lightens o'er her face;
    Where thoughts serenely sweet express
    How pure, how dear their dwelling place.

    And on that cheek, and o'er that brow
    So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
    The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
    But tell of days in goodness spent,
    A mind at peace with all below,
    A heart whose love is innocent!
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    wow how beautiful nature is..

    i love the line, her smile out shines the sun.,

    how radiant she seems..

    love n peace from saff
  4. StarGateKeeper

    StarGateKeeper Member

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    I love that poem from Byron... I definately associate the beauty of a woman with the beauty of nature, especially this woman... Thanks for your comments... I will post more...

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