This is my first real attempt at writing poetry since the one i wrote after my first son died(1996)...be gentle folks... so far away and yet so near your voice is gone yet still i hear the beating of your heart inside across the oceans dark and wide alone i sit and wander freely inside a mind you have completely my waters cold, your deserts hot i have you, yet i have you not a secret love i dare not hold a lady lovely and so bold rides waves of spirits through my soul and passion brings i cant control
thank you so much. i have just recently been inspired by someone very special to start writing again. i really appreciate the comment.
*puts away the baseball bat* Is duct tape gentle? *~lol~* A very nice poem. Welcome back from writers block.
absolutely lovely... *sighs* 'alone i sit and wander freely inside a mind you have completely my waters cold, your deserts hot i have you, yet i have you not' it's *all* good, but that was the best part...
who the fuck gave me a bad rep for posting this comment??? i was being serious when i said the poem was goood. i really liked it.