i saw 10cent did 1 but no1 els did so lets do it hurr mcs wanna face me thinkin dey kno me dum niggas dont relize u cant overthroe me im a fanatic wit rap, the mic is like my 6th finga usin it like my index on the trigga, jus smokin niggas makin niggas regrt dey eva thot bout steppin up to face me, the masta freestylin mothafucka makin yall niggas wonder "dont he eva quit" makin yall niggas wonder "hows he do dat shit" see wen i do drop the mic, yall betta run cuz dat shits gonna crata like a atomic bom my rhymes r masive, u betta moov yo feet cause I see u swetin like retards n a spelin bee ok now sum1 els go
I think you flow nicely, however, most people on this forum don't care or even understand the meaning of rap. So you might get closed-minded responses.
We are speaking about a man who use to post nothing but rap lyrics on this forum. He had his own little wannabe gangsta club named, "RP Records." His name was Smokey420. Needless to say, he is my ex fiance.