Bang

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tom Joad, Jul 5, 2011.

  1. Tom Joad

    Tom Joad Member

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    Blinded by snow the sparrow squeels in fear
    Beaten down by the moment and the time being
    Dreams and thoughts of the life he wanted
    On a fresh field over acres of doom
    Eclipsed by the pyramids and echoes of the sunlight
    Remotely traced to the howls of the wolves
    He stares and turns to the queen of his imaginary fortune
    Blinking and banging his way through the night
    Let down and broken and tattered and torn
    Alone in the grave of his brothers before him
    Rest now and remove your fate
    From the cobblestone and script it lies upon
    Banging and burning it collapes before you
    And returns back to your blinking eyes
    Alone you stare at the majesty before
    Dreaming and scheming of what below lies
    I'll see you in a place not far or recognizable
    To the eye of the phantom that whispers your name
    Begin to remember the presence of the gods
    Unknown to the people that rule the night
    Banging burning twisting torture
    The sound continues through the rest of your days
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    i love how you write...strong passages man. Good to see you aroud
     

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