Rain, rain and more rain. Won't wash away my cares or woes Ain't done a thing to cleanse my soul Just gives me the blues and lets me go to more rain, rain rain. ______________ I know this needs another stanza, but it won't come right now and I guess I wanted to know if it's worth the effort first too. Imma scream if it doesn't stop raining for at least a few days!
Heh, this could be a great -blues- song, though thematically overused, your personal touches make it special.
great picture your words.... my mind feels like this today like the rain it passes.... lovenpeace from saff
ty~* I hadda get it out, lol, cause if I don't get a huge dose of sunshine soon I think Imma grow mold!!
The weather has been cloudy for 3 days in my nick of the woods. I'm ready to see that sunshine peek out as well! greatpoem! luv mj
Bhaskaridgit.... ...this post is my poem, not my frigging tits! At least you changed the phrasology. Goofball!!
It was raining the entire 12 hour trip I had yesterday, so I feel ya (memorial day traffic, atlanta, and torrential downpours are not ingredients in happiness)! I do think it needs another stanza, an elaborative emotional touch or something, but it'll come when it comes...
ty~* Yeah, I just didnt know if it was worth the effort or not. LOL Sylvan, all I could do when I wrote that was look out and hear drip..drip..drip.. Some sun finally today. Hope it lasts. When I read it now tho...I have that basic blues riff going thru my my mind *giggles!* duh, duh duh duh DUH! LOL
