Its tough to say how i feel Im down and out Theres no one here lies and desperation swiming around everywhere Theres no one here onee happy and one sad it comes and goes i dont even get the chance It came back like a train wreck no feelings of faith or love Just down and out a push and a shove Im idle for a minute Drinking doesnt sound bad maybe ill finally choke and never come back deep, deep emotions bottled up whole I cant let it out, i cant let it go certain people give a feeling of a better place i just wana feel safe Lets us run to the water but there is no "us" my mind just made it up I lost my way during the depressing tide but I promise i'll meet you in another past life
Well done for writing a poem dealing with that kind of emotion. It's not easy I know. I especially like the last line "I promise I'll meet you in another past life." Very cool! Peace.
