another damn love poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Jan 5, 2010.

  1. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    caliente Senior Member

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    The middle stanza gets a little lofty for my taste, chief. But some wonderful lines, as always.

    Language is born
    As you breathe through my strings.


    That's absolutely splendid. It made me catch my breath ....
     
  3. chiefburningtoke

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    Thanks Caliente, I always think America can use a little extra loftiness-except in politics...
     

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