Another battle within

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tommyboy487, Aug 17, 2005.

  1. tommyboy487

    tommyboy487 Member

    Defences high,
    With a hardy confidence.
    A selfish generosity,
    Aside from the point,
    Supported by endless love.

    Yet penetration.
    Unexpected and undeserved.
    Between the steel guards,
    A seeping liquid poison,
    Mercilessly floating on leant trust.
    Breathing out gratitude's relief,
    As hearts lay flopping,
    Like dying fish.

    A girl?
    For against this was the protection.
    My love was elsewhere,
    In form of time and location.
    Revealing not even to me,
    From fear of an instinct numbing...
    Performed by the subconscience.

    A heart must love.

    And now I suffer.
    Guilt, longing, and regret.
    Amplified by my own stupidity.
    And though my mind,
    So ignorant and blind,
    Could have never permitted this defeat,
    A shattered heart,
    Dry and cracked,
    Lays lifeless in my gut.
  2. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

    I liked it... sounds familiar . . . btw.... interesting pic
  3. tommyboy487

    tommyboy487 Member

    thank you..
    ...yea thats shaving cream if you're wondering:)
  4. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    wow that was an awesome poem!! i really liked it. :D
  5. ziggyfly

    ziggyfly Member

    its a verry well poem.. good job tom!
  6. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

    actually i like the other pic better :)
  7. tommyboy487

    tommyboy487 Member

    lol which one:| ... i change it pretty much every day...
  8. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

    wow i like that one best... but the one i was refering to was the one in the hat
  9. tommyboy487

    tommyboy487 Member

    well you can have it
    we dont get along:)
  10. tommyboy487

    tommyboy487 Member

    Heated to Gold,
    And harnessed 'round the necks
    Of God's slaves...
    Hardly room to breathe...
    And a beautiful golden chain,
    Reaching to the heavens,
    Leaves breathless with wonder
    The rebellious souls.

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