anonymous feelings in an anonymous mind sitting watching back and forth Atari eyes the truth is in the lies we tell to keep ourselves sane sanity is reality objective relative cruising midnight diners panic drives the weary another day another sin another starless, tearless sky stainless steel facade to keep out the demons burning churning electric sparkle eyes
welcome to the forums! I enjoyed this one much, the broken flow and tight lines worked well, imo, I really loved the "Atari eyes" and "cruising midnight diners" images, and overall thought this had a kinda cyberpunk quality to it (if you're familiar with that), though I'd probably be at odds to explain how... thanks for sharing this one, though, good stuff!
thanks. i love writing but i'm still nothing but an amateur (spelling?). it's good to have positive feedback though. once again, thanks.
