an unsound heart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tye_DyeBrain, Aug 1, 2004.

  1. Tye_DyeBrain

    Tye_DyeBrain Member

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    *Dedicated to a friend*

    an unsound heart

    Bare flesh pressed against a cold tile floor
    I'm crossing over monotone patters
    The endless white; the endless emptiness
    Unhappy windows lacking warmth
    Symmetrical lines and perfect measurements
    A colorless hell entrapment
    Freshly built yet smelling old
    Like lavender and baby powder
    Stale vanilla smoke and copper pennies
    Cornered off and infinte squares
    Producing imminent hopelessness
    Tourniquets covering worn scars
    Yellowed skin and spotted purple bruises
    Walls whispering withered white
    Buried beneath my bleeding bed sheets
    Chained to a mirror and hairbrush
    With a cracked perception and
    A half empty paper cup
    Swallowing pills to stop swallowing pills
    Hypodermic needles to calm cravings
    An iron won't press this crinkled mind
    With its carousel hallucinations
    And its schizophrenic dreams
    An iced ingenue makes angel imprints
    Over daffodils dusted in white substance
    Smeared and trampled under treacherous layers
    All sunshine obfuscated from plain view
    Eyelids covered in thick layers of dust
    Spider webs entangled in my fingertips
    Trouble breathing in air thick with clean
    Inhaling becomes carefully executed
    The Plagues of this incurable disorder
    Locked away to numb consciousness
    To prevent harm; to breed harm
    Within my unsound heart
     
  2. hipeeee

    hipeeee Member

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    wow man thats fucking awsome ive only read 2 but im a fan of ur poetry im me on aim sometime :)
     
  3. sunkiss672672

    sunkiss672672 Member

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    that sweet.. rock on girl.
     
  4. LostMindofPropheticV

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    i very much liked the imagery of this poem. Throughout the entire peice I was able to build a scene in my mind. Good work. :)
     

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