Once upon a day or so, a girl looked up to the sky- she thought she watched a star being born but what she saw was love dying. That night she ran away to dreamers' nowhere land while her lover slept, he could never have known how she threw his ring from her hand- crossing the divide between life and death. She knew that what she'd done she had done for the best, living without love was a life she would hate to regret.
I like this, but I think it needs some editing with either the punctuation or the amount of syllables per line. It just read kind of choppy in my head.
