an empty tomb

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by neodude1212, Dec 28, 2009.

  1. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    The blue halls echoed in crystal
    as the colossus comes forth
    he tried too hard and his
    smell fades
    to endow my fact with more darkness
    was his fate
    every tone rises an octave
    and the chill bumps become visible
    for she stands in the shadows
    waiting to join the swirl
    and end night versus day
    There is coughing rebounding
    far in the distance
    the trees shake
    and I'm still not better yet
     
  2. does2

    does2 Member

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    Wow, the last half is epic.

    I'm really diggin' those last seven lines.
     

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